There was a slight breeze in the air
that night. Not enough to make the leaves fall off the trees, but enough to
make them rustle. The air was cool. It was a chilly fall night and the moon was
high in the sky. The school had lights on inside, probably trying to fool
people into thinking that it was still in use. The school was abandoned, and
everyone knew. The parking lot was almost always empty, unless two cars were
there to meet up and exchange questionable materials. There are no lights on
the parking lot, only the gentle light of the moon to display any activity that
went on there.
Off to the right there was a small
play structure, from a distance it looked like the parking lot was empty, but
with a closer look it was plain to see that there were several middle school
aged kids just hanging out there waiting for something to happen. They must
have seen the headlights because as soon as the car was parked, they started
walking away. The parking lot was empty, the only sounds were the cars on the
street and the rustling of the leaves. It was perfect.
We parked the car, rolled down the
windows, and cranked up the tunes. Not the kind of tunes that would play at a
rave or exciting concert, these songs were romantic, old timey, and happy. They
were the kinds of songs that take you back in time, to a place when simple
romantic gestures were commonplace.
My teeth were chattering
uncontrollably. He said, “Would you rather get back in the car?” I said “no”,
because I knew that what was about to happen would be worth any teeth chattering
and shivers that came my way. He took my hand, placed his other around my
waist, and we danced. They were not extravagant, graceful dance moves by any
means, but they meant everything to me. In the past I had thought that this
kind of thing only happened in storybooks and movies. But this happened, it was
happening, and I was in love.
I can’t remember how long we danced,
several songs I presume. Somewhere in there he picked me up and spun me around.
I guess you could say that was when I knew I was the happiest I had ever been.
People kept driving past the empty abandoned school parking lot, but I was lost
in the moment. Every once in a while, a pair of headlights would shine like
spotlights on a stage, and we danced all the more. The breeze continued to
blow, and the leaves continued to rustle. The moon hung in the sky like a
chandelier, and the empty abandoned parking lot became a beautiful, dazzling
ball room that only the two of us could see. People say that enchantment and
magic aren't real, but I know I was part of a magical moment that night.
Wow, Wow!! That was SO great! I think this is my favorite of all that you've written so far. It showcases your writing voice, your thoughts, your personality and just you. It sets the stage perfectly, and then draws us in to it. We share your magic. I love the moon like a chandelier, and that is a great alliteration. I love that the rustling leaves start the piece and come full circle to the ending. An accompaniment to the music that you hear. If I can add one edit (?): In the last line, isn't should be changed to aren't. If it was just enchantment or just magic it would be isn't, but with both it should be aren't. Would you mind if I share this with Kyle? He's going through a rough time (Bailey just died) and I know he would love it. But it you'd rather I didn't just say so. Thanks for sharing this, it made my day : )
ReplyDeleteYes you can share it with Kyle:) and thanks for the fix for the last line!
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